crud's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[[=Impending Death=]]]

agghhhh my spleen!!!

well considering it's supposed to be horribly unlistenable...10 points! this fucking rocked my sonic world on a monday night. amazing selection of sound effects. freak as shit....that's really freaky.

Nostrap responds:

Hell yes.

[BinarySun]

tight and smooth but no direction

very cool loop. sounds nothing at all like a pre-packaged techno song and sounds very slick at the same time. only problem is that it doesn't go anywhere emotionally, didn't really stir anything up that might work in a flash. but then again, it's already been used 4 times...coo stuff.

[K.O.]

not enough

too short!!! this song has too little in it. i know the guitar samples are from FL studio, try to splice them up and make them your own. this was basically two loops with minimal drum beats. BUT, in spite of all that, with a fat bassline this could make a good rap song.

[-SM-The Essence of All]

nice, room for improvement if you like...

nice and slow. not too crazy, no dissonance and plenty of delay. a very ambient, simple, plucked out little jam you have here sir. not too complex on the melodies though. What you could possibly do is make this into the chorus and then drop the main pattern and make a verse that has similar elements but isn't the same loop over and over. it would create a change and when the familar chorus comes back, you've got your self a catchy little song! kick it!

ShadowMaster66 responds:

hey crud!! Thanks alot for reviewing all my songs and giving me tips. ill keep checking in on you to see if you get new ones. See ya!

-SM-

[-SM-The Undone]

hmmm, not as good

hmmm, this one needs some work. It sounds like you made a funky dissonant clashing jam and just added it up with other instruments without considering the actual movement of the song. It doesn't really seem to move. the heavy beat will change a little, but stays clunky and random. With this, i'd put some more backround help. strings and some sort of bassline to keep the notes connected. sorry if this seems harsh, it's really just constructive, i know you've got the goods in yah, just spend a few more hours next time. peace.

ShadowMaster66 responds:

hey crud!! Thanks alot for reviewing all my songs and giving me tips. ill keep checking in on you to see if you get new ones. See ya!

-SM-

[-SM-The Everloved.]

yeah, moody

hey, very nice stuff here. i like the overall feeling it gives. to me it seems like a theme to a reluctant traveler walking the streets alone and gazing off into the sunset. The music was simplistic but really i wouldn't think of anything i could add except some transistion FX or a change in patterns (despite how well they work) very cool. abrupt ending though. just export it it and change it to "leave remainder" and it will smooth out the end. good luck

ShadowMaster66 responds:

hey crud!! Thanks alot for reviewing all my songs and giving me tips. ill keep checking in on you to see if you get new ones. See ya!

-SM-

[Helix - Fear]

oh diggity,

so i just submitted my first industrial track and thought i'd see what i'm up against. I must say, this is pretty fuckin awesome. what is needed now is some heavy reverb screams and some trent reznor. seriously, this so dirty and delicious. it even has a groove to it, so some sick industrial lover can dance to it. good god man. heavy and slick. the drum and bass work is done by a skilled master. no wonder it's a gold track.

Helix6 responds:

Thanks. Don't know what else to say, except nice analysis.

[Endless Night -Remix-]

not bad

it started pretty slow with the long one note bass/rave synth. but i think overall it was a pretty thick and powerful connection of sounds, the occasional dissonent notes clashed and yet worked with the mood. besides simplicity this song wokrs reall well. i could see this in a spy flash movie or space action....thing...

fix that ending!! haha, good stuff man, keep it up and up and u and up and up and up and up!

[Rucklo - Teknokrator]

all tens dammit

man, i almost want to say that this has TOO many effects! you must have had fun adding in all those blending and slashing effects. it adds lots of variation, it never once felt like a loop, always introducing new effects, filters, thick beat rolls and even some fight club soundtrack style bass and flanger sounds. Hmmm, i dont think it matters if that makes sense. awesome song, experimentation is like a fine wine, if you drinking it enough.....you'll get drunk in love with it.

Rucklo responds:

Oh yeah, it sure id fun, but it takes a loooong time making it too...
Well, just go ahead and get drunk man!!!
Thanx for the review!!!

/Rucklo

[Rucklo - Insomnia]

oh definitely good work

yeah man. yeah. the sound was crystal clear on this. the bass and kick were so round and smooth that all the blippy zaps stuck out like lasers shooting inside of a metal cube room. but when the dx-10ish piano came in it sounded too simple and didn't fit in with all the electro sounds. but then i got used to its chord feeling and the phat beat rolled on. nice work Rucklo.nice work.

Rucklo responds:

I was a lil insecure bout that piano, but after a few listens, i thought it fitted right in, so it´s there to stay :)
Really glad ya liked the song man, expect more breakbeat/hiphop style things from me; I just got me a CD-scratcher :)
Thanx alot for the review mate!!!

/Rucklo