Okay, there is good stuff
The beggining was way cool, it me sitting up in my chair saying...."heyyyy!" the classic upbeat bass, and the awesome beat, way cool, but then the bass teamed up with some chimes and then the beat went somewhere completely different and and new percy sound comes out of nowhere and then the songs over...What i'm trying to point out it, you started with a wonderful sound, and i know it's hard to keep it all one sound when you keep finding riffs you really like and want to include....but really, it just takes away from it...i would say, next time, try and stick with one genre, the beginning sounded alot like dance music.try that one, another trick might be to just spend the extra 3 hours to just sit down and finish a song in one fluid thought as it were....um, so that the ADD doesn't ruin it. So I'll say it again...the beginning choir,bass, and drums were awesome, stick with those!